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Welcome to Inaba

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Souji:
So here I am, relocated again
Can't shake this feeling that's dragging me down
This place is strange, yet another school change
What secrets loom in the fog of this town?

Dojima:
Nothing to fear
Things are more peaceful here
So load your things in the car and we'll head on back

Nanako:
I'm Nanako

Dojima:
and I'm Ryotaro
but you'll call me Dojima or you'll get a good smack

(in the background)

Yosuke:
Ms. Satonaka, I'm real sorry!
Can you forgive me?

Chie:
What did you do to my DVD?!
TRIAL OF THE DRAGON!

(they get in the car)

Souji:
I'm used to towns full of people and crowds
I guess that this is a nice change of pace
Out the window is a town I don't know
Wonder if I'll make some friends in this place?

(talking)

Nanako:
Dadddd, I need something...

Dojima:
What would that be?

Nanako:
...

Dojima:
Oh. OH.
well...

(singing again)

The station's right there
Let's all get some fresh air

Souji:
Uh, but it's a gas station so it smells like gas...

Attendant:
Hey kid that's rude
What's with your attitude?
You would think an out-of-towner would have more class.

Souji:
By the way I've got something to ask
Why are we singing?

Attendant:
Don't ask me, kid, I just pump the gas.
It's nice to meet you.

(they shake hands, brief instrumental)

Welcome to town
Take a good look around
Because nothing much happens in a town this small.

Dojima:
It isn't the best

Nanako:
But we do have Junes!

Adachi:
It's this one-horse-town's version of a shopping mall.

(talking)

Dojima:
Adachi! What are you doing here?

Adachi (holding grocery bags):
Just stopped to get gas on my way home from Junes.

Souji:
Who's this guy?

Dojima:
This is Tohru Adachi, he's a rookie on the force.

Adachi:
Yep! I'm Dojima-san's slave. So you're...?

Souji:
Seta Souji, Dojima's nephew. Just moved.

Adachi:
Oh, really? Well then...
(singing)

Just keep in line and I'm sure you'll do fine
Dojima-san doesn't tolerate punks

Dojima:
Hey that's not true, I'm still partners with you

Adachi (whisper-sings):
And he's a lot more laid-back when he's drunk.

(talking:

Souji:
Good to... um... know. Adachi-san, was it?

Adachi:
Yep. Guess I'll see you around. Good luck with school and all that.

Souji:
Right...

Dojima:
Ready to go?

Souji:
Sure.

(they get in the car, instrumental break while they drive - possible insert of other characters)

Souji:
Home here I come, not the one I came from
But the new one that is waiting for me
It's so surreal, In fact I almost feel
Like this town's hiding a big mystery

(they reach the door)

Dojima:
Hold on a second while I get my key

(unlocks the door and they go in. Nanako turns on the TV)

Nanako:
Hey look, they're showing Junes on TV!
Hey~! Ok, so I'm going through and editing some of the already existing songs to make them more... musical?

All of you in :iconpersona-musical: are probably kinda familiar with the already existing songs, so you may notice that I took some lyrics from :iconpandasam:'s song - which is one of the songs that got this group started.

I still want to add more to this, I just want to have a good... opening song? I dunno. I'm still not sure if I'm happy with this, but I DO already have a tune and everything so once I can record it...

Also, I know we decided before that Souji wouldn't sing, but... I wrote him singing? It felt less awkward and more musical for me. You'll notice that I still have him noticing that everyone's singing, though.

Although now that I think about it that will probably ruin some of the later lyrics we've got... um... We'll figure it out!

In any case, enjoy? Criticism is greatly appreciated~! Writing a musical's a long process and I'm thinking before we get a final product that's really great we'll have to go over some of our songs and rework them anyway!

Ok I'm done talking for now.
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Happykate0007's avatar
yay I say something:D Good job, I love the lyrics:D